Rythym WIP

Just putting this up to get my friends opinions...

Hey guys, i'm trying digital again, tell me what you think so far. I know the colors are weird, i'm trying to fix that, especially on the shirt. I really wanted the lines to be green, but now i'm thinkning i might have to change that. Color scheme suggestions would be nice.

Also, i tried a soft(ish) shading style, but i dunno how it looks. If you think a hard-line style would suit the pic better, tell me now >< any other places you think i should add detail??

and of course anything basic that i got wrong (body shape, shading, blah blah) tell me quick so i can fix it ><

I'm super slow at digital, this right here took me like, 6 hours. I'm getting kinda frustrated, so i'm reading up on reborn (re-reading the future arc cause i forgot most of it) and waiting for your feedback.... help me out here

I'll update this periodically i guess, just to make sure i'm doing things right